Turning Back (4/?)

[songforevela]

Title: Turning Back (4/?)
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[candy_003]

Oh my...Human Edward is so... *melts*

I love this story! It's probably my favorite human Edward story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[songforevela]

I melt for human Edward, too :)

It makes me so happy to hear that this might be one of your favorite human Edward stories. I can't wait to get the next chapter posted!

[sal_lumos]

This moment is really, indescribably beautiful:
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In the moment that he finally felt his heartbeat, his face softened, and the tension in his body released its heavy load. He reached for me, kissing me softly.

"Oh my God," Edward murmured against my lips, breathless.
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I'm intrigued to see how far Rosalie will take this. And equally petrified of Alice's vision...

Lovely chapter! :)

[songforevela]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you loved the last several lines; it took me a while to get to them. I wanted to try and capture that tension, and then Edward's release when he realizes what has happened to him.

More with Rosalie and Alice to come! Stay tuned...

[bookjamprincess]

This story is amazing! I cannot wait for more XD

[songforevela]

Thanks so much!

[____guts]

Yep. This is my favorite Edward-turning-human story I've read. LOVE IT! update soon, please! I can't WAIT to see what happens!

[songforevela]

Oh, I'm so happy to hear this is one of your favorite human-Edward stories! I'll update as soon as I can! I'm a slow writer, and there's A LOT more story coming...

[andrea_123]

I just finished reading all of the chapters and I absolutely love it! You're an amazing writer :D

Do you mind if I add you?

[songforevela]

Thank you so much! This is my first story, so I'm really glad you've enjoyed it.

Of course, you can add me!