Turning Back (5/?)

[songforevela]

Title: Turning Back (5/?)
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[haniie_x]

Really good....Different in a good way =]]

I like the peace at the moment but also the way that you hint at a storm coming and I can't wait till Rosalie says something to Edward about it....I bet he will explode =D

Keep updating...SOON!!!

[songforevela]

There sure is a storm coming! But I wanted Edward and Bella to have a little calm before the storm.

Thank you so much for reading!

[rikoura06]

I'm so glad you updated :D I've been really eager to read this chapter! And it was wonderful, but I feel bad because I have nothing to pick at and over analyse! XP Apart from the fact that Edward needs to get his strength back. As we've never seen anyone do this, I suppose it makes sense, since he's used to being much stronger and durable than humans usually are ;P

More human Edward moments please X3

Ooh, and the 'our lives never remain normal for long' - I hope that's not a mention of a certain vampire royal family catching wind of Bella's miracle blood?

[songforevela]

I agree, Edward does need to get his strength back, and he will. I liked the idea of him having to go through a period of recovery, considering how hard this change has been on his body. I also like the idea of Edward actually enjoying the recovery process and being taken care of by Bella because for once he is on her level, no longer perfect at everything. Do you think that makes sense for him?

Hmmm...and the Volturi. I've been working and reworking the upcoming plot, and you know, I think they have to make an appearance :)

[rikoura06]

It's an awesome idea - and for once it gives Bella a chance to look after Edward :D I can see that he would enjoy that! And it totally makes sense. I mean, he can just be himself and not have to worry about everything when he just want's to be with her. He should definitely take advantage of that while it's still there :)

It seems inevitable that they would show up considering that there's a cure for vampires to change back to being humans - they would have a serious problem on their hands if everyone changed back still knowing their secrets...

As always, I hope you update soon - I honestly can't wait for the next chapter about human Edward and nurse Bella! <3

[melmelia]

i love your idea! its very original! please keep writing!

[songforevela]

Thank you! I will definitely keep writing!

[vi0lent_delight]

i just read all the chapters starting from one in about a half-hour or less and woww i love this & and so excited for the next chapter :)

[songforevela]

Wow! Thanks! I'm so happy to hear you're excited for the next chapter; I'll get it written as soon as I can!

[songforevela]

I hadn't thought about the similarities between Edward's change and what newborn vampires go through, but that's a really interesting thought!

Thanks for reading!