Ok...call me crazy, but I like your story line better than BD. BD wussed out big time. I will def need to read whatever else you've got planned for The Cullens.
Yeah, I was not a big fan of BD either, which broke my heart a little. I wanted to like it, it just wasn't right in a lot of ways. That baby came out of nowhere!
I can't lie, I'm so glad I didn't start reading this before now, waiting for the chapters would have driven me insane.
Really, it's a fantastic concept, and you wrote it extremely well. I love the story, and I love your portrayal of the Cullen's. The Bella/Edward smut was very discreet and beautiful. IMHO you made the climax very imaginative..in fact I think the whole story can be summed up as imaginative.
Extremely fabulous story, thank you for sharing it & I'm looking forward to a peek into the future of the Cullen's life in the epilogue.
A part of me honestly wants a story about the human Cullen's life. And as Kudisirony questioned above, I'm intrigued by the possibilities of where their human life will move the Cullen family to. XD
Lovely! Don't keep us waiting for the epilogue for too long if you can manage it. =)
Re: Love it!!!songforevelaAugust 29 2008, 01:53:32 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm glad you were able to read it in one go---I couldn't help but write the cliff hangers, but I think it flows better with one chapter leading into the next right away.
I'm anxious to get a peak into the Cullen's life as well; grad school has started, and I just don't have nearly as much time to write. I'm also thinking of writing some "missing scenes" of Turning Back, set as Edward is adjusting to being human.
I totally just read this story in one swoop. It was amazing! You are an awesome writer, really. :D I loved it so much! My heart is all swelled up and happy that they're all human X3 <333333 Fabulous story. Great. Wonderful. Amazing. Etc. :]
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Really, it's a fantastic concept, and you wrote it extremely well. I love the story, and I love your portrayal of the Cullen's. The Bella/Edward smut was very discreet and beautiful. IMHO you made the climax very imaginative..in fact I think the whole story can be summed up as imaginative.
Extremely fabulous story, thank you for sharing it & I'm looking forward to a peek into the future of the Cullen's life in the epilogue.
A part of me honestly wants a story about the human Cullen's life. And as Kudisirony questioned above, I'm intrigued by the possibilities of where their human life will move the Cullen family to. XD
Lovely! Don't keep us waiting for the epilogue for too long if you can manage it. =)
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I'm anxious to get a peak into the Cullen's life as well; grad school has started, and I just don't have nearly as much time to write. I'm also thinking of writing some "missing scenes" of Turning Back, set as Edward is adjusting to being human.
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I loved it so much! My heart is all swelled up and happy that they're all human X3
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Fabulous story. Great. Wonderful. Amazing. Etc. :]
Can't wait for the epilogue!
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