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Great Famine to Them, Feast for Us!
Nov 12, 2005 15:48
This introduction just seems so bleak (
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anonymous
November 14 2005, 19:01:43 UTC
the thought behind it is great... but the words that You use don't express it the way it deserves to be. many of the lines are great, but i think You should rework it.
-hills
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the_subhuman
November 15 2005, 03:46:04 UTC
i agree. i need to do some rewording here, its almost immature the way that i say some of the things in this song...a little oversarcastic.
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__helloelise
November 15 2005, 13:57:45 UTC
hey ben. add me back?
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