The first paragraph really pulled me in. And I felt as though the back story you gave him could really fit, I always thought Hibari's interest in Namimori came from his grandfather, whether it was imagined or mentioned in the manga. I can imagine him playing the violin as well, that or the flute perhaps... I also like how you didn't stray with Hibari's pesonality, he wasn't angsty and I enjoyed that. I also liked how you tackled Tsuna, I could just picture him stuck for words like a goldfish <3 And his little moment of standing up for himself was sweet and also of Hibari's acceptance.
I really enjoyed this I'll have to track down your Bel fic, you're a good writer.
The first paragraph was the hardest for me to come up with, because I needed something to start the whole thing off that wasn't too corny. Beginnings and endings are always difficult for me, haha. I'm glad that the characterizations were to your liking because that's something that's really important to me. Yeah, this is a pairing fic, but it's not something that is totally out of character for either of them, or at least that was my goal. 8D
It should be easy to find! I think it's only two posts down from this one. I hope you enjoy that one, as well. ♥ Thanks for commenting!
Hibari's thoughts are captured wonderfully, and the pair of them are also in character. And -
I thank you for writing this. It made my day. And I fail at giving comments, but I really want to thank you for this! I'll be looking forward to your future work!
I like this a lot. Your Hibari is completely in character, but with a bit more humanity than we usually get to see, and that's awesome. So is Tsuna's embarrassingly large crush. xD His blushing at Hibari? Priceless. I'm also all about the image of Hibari playing violin to the setting sun, or smacking Tsuna upside the head for having the gall to walk next to him.
Wonderful work! Honestly, you're writing style is a sight for sore eyes! I enjoyed this piece of work quite a lot. The characterization was spot on and the atmosphere was delightful. Thank you!
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The first paragraph really pulled me in. And I felt as though the back story you gave him could really fit, I always thought Hibari's interest in Namimori came from his grandfather, whether it was imagined or mentioned in the manga. I can imagine him playing the violin as well, that or the flute perhaps... I also like how you didn't stray with Hibari's pesonality, he wasn't angsty and I enjoyed that. I also liked how you tackled Tsuna, I could just picture him stuck for words like a goldfish <3 And his little moment of standing up for himself was sweet and also of Hibari's acceptance.
I really enjoyed this I'll have to track down your Bel fic, you're a good writer.
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The first paragraph was the hardest for me to come up with, because I needed something to start the whole thing off that wasn't too corny. Beginnings and endings are always difficult for me, haha. I'm glad that the characterizations were to your liking because that's something that's really important to me. Yeah, this is a pairing fic, but it's not something that is totally out of character for either of them, or at least that was my goal. 8D
It should be easy to find! I think it's only two posts down from this one. I hope you enjoy that one, as well. ♥ Thanks for commenting!
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I really enjoyed the story and the interaction between Tsuna and Hibari. It seems almost canon, I can totally see it happening.
I also love how it's structured, it makes the whole story flows beautifully.
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(Note: What the... I just totally deleted my own comment XP I feel retarded.)
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Hibari's thoughts are captured wonderfully, and the pair of them are also in character. And -
I thank you for writing this. It made my day. And I fail at giving comments, but I really want to thank you for this! I'll be looking forward to your future work!
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Thanks for sharing!
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The characterization was spot on and the atmosphere was delightful.
Thank you!
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