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Shifting Attention: B-Side or Constant

Oct 02, 2009 23:57

TITLE: Shifting Attention: B-Side or Constant
RATING: PG-13 (for suggested content)
PAIRINGS: Sakumoto
WORDCOUNT: 3,418
SUMMARY: Jun makes a deal with Sho
NOTES: This is Shifting Attention from Jun's POV. The first part was actually written before Shifting Attention but I thought it would be better as a spin-off instead of the original.

( The trombone player could see through his lie and took amusement in Sho's sweaty palms and twitching lips. It was simply entertaining watching a man older than you suffer. )

pairing: ohno/nino, genre: angst, genre: romance, rating: pg, pairing: sho/jun, pairing: sho/female

Comments 29

statr October 3 2009, 04:18:31 UTC

I think I like this POV more. thank you! that was fun.

katmillia October 3 2009, 04:31:13 UTC

HOMG I LOVE YOUR ICON :O

statr October 3 2009, 11:08:11 UTC

i didn't make it but thanks!

reversemirror October 3 2009, 13:18:25 UTC

Thanks for reading!

katmillia October 3 2009, 04:29:02 UTC

guuuhhhhh I did a happy dance! Not only did I adore the original, but this one was a perfect complement to it, a wonderful look at the other side of what was happening. <3 <3 so beautiful, so much love for you!

reversemirror October 3 2009, 13:27:48 UTC

♥♥Thanks for reading!

b00kw0rm79 October 3 2009, 04:48:33 UTC

I read the A-side before reading this.
They are both awesome!

Jun's POV is more romantic because he's upfront about his feelings. Whereas, Sho also has feelings but he refuses to voice them aloud. It's hard to choose which one I like more. Tough choice, but I think it's the one told through Sho's point of view.

reversemirror October 3 2009, 13:39:12 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Jun's POV is more romantic because he's upfront about his feelings. Whereas, Sho also has feelings but he refuses to voice them aloud.
That's exactly what I was going for!:D

salwaphoenix October 3 2009, 04:58:45 UTC

the way jun mind works <333

i love sho's POV more, just because i love reading how people who loves Jun think about him ^^ but that doesn't make Jun's POV any less interesting.. he's complicated as he is already, and the person in love with him is indeed a lucky man XD *gasp* i really say 'man' XD

thanks!

reversemirror October 3 2009, 13:39:56 UTC

Thanks for reading!

he's complicated as he is already, and the person in love with him is indeed a lucky man XD *gasp* i really say 'man' XD
lol xD

salwaphoenix February 4 2010, 13:31:58 UTC

re-read and re-loved all over again :D

ririirawrs October 3 2009, 07:04:32 UTC

aww this is SUCH a cute fic <3 God I agree with Jun: Sho's.Piercings.Are.Sexy. I also like the POV of this fic =D I'm used to other's POV on Sho so I really really like this <33

reversemirror October 3 2009, 13:40:32 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Sho's.Piercings.Are.Sexy.
Oh god yes! xD