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Enough

Oct 12, 2009 15:30

Title: Enough
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Owning humans are illegal in most parts of the world (and I can't afford their fabulousness)
Pairings: Junxfemale, Sakumoto
Wordcount: 1,382
Summary: It's been a while since Sho and Jun had a talk
Notes: This was another fic written for the sakumoto contest that I obivously didn't enter. I found it while looking for another ( Read more... )

words: 501~2000, genre: romance, pairing: jun/female, rating: pg, pairing: sho/jun, genre: drama

Comments 26

arashijun October 13 2009, 02:40:24 UTC

Awww!
That was so cuteeee><

Loved it.
So effinmazing!

reversemirror October 13 2009, 03:29:05 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting about the beta! It's my fault for being so hasty and forgetting the time. ^^;;

arashijun October 13 2009, 03:36:15 UTC

F-forgetting time? Ehh? *Confused...* Haha Im so lost.
But its okay. Ill recover..I do believe. Haha.
You are welcome for the comment though. =]

sawadashin October 13 2009, 05:11:02 UTC

WELL WRITTEN. LUV IT. SO EMO ....

reversemirror October 14 2009, 01:08:10 UTC

Emo, really? ^^;; Thanks for reading!

l3aibua October 13 2009, 10:23:11 UTC

Bittersweet angst is good for my heart once in a while :))
Thanks for the sakumoto love <333

reversemirror October 14 2009, 01:08:23 UTC

Thanks for reading!♥

jaeholovelove October 13 2009, 23:23:48 UTC

This piece was so...evocative. Ever since my discovery of the fandom, I've always liked Sho best. Though Sakuraiba is extremely popular, I always seemed to get drawn into the Sakumoto pairing. Though the chemistry between all five members is amazing and too incredible to describe, the way Sho and Jun interact is jarringly awkward and filled with tension. Your description of that is great here. I liked your details of the rift between Sho/Jun over the years and how Sho is nervous around the boy he doen't quite know anymore. I especially liked the ending as it showed Jun without his mask of indifference and his semi-reconciliation with Sho that is far from a happily ever after. I bet we all wonder what happened to the two of them who, when younger, can be argued as the closest members of Arashi. Reminds me alot of Akame...

Anyways, nice job. Your writing is subtle and lovely and I hope to read more :)

reversemirror October 14 2009, 01:11:47 UTC

Thanks for the wonderful comment! :D Jun, I think, is awkward pretty much around everyone, more so with Sho. And Sho just doesn't know how to treat him anymore after watching him grow up. And I really don't think that love like that can truly be forgotten or even fully healed.

So thanks again for the comment and thanks for reading

boblemon October 15 2009, 04:55:25 UTC

Aw, a little confusing, but it ended on a good note. Poor Jun~ scarred from Sho-chan's rejection. T.T At least Sho was honest and talked to him about it.

SHO WHY DON'T YOU LOVE HIM YOU TOOK AWAY MY SAKUMOTO

reversemirror October 17 2009, 03:28:33 UTC

Sorry it was confusing. |D Thanks for reading though!