Baby

Mar 01, 2010 23:15

Title: Baby
Rating: R (for sexual situations. WARNING: Borderline non-consensual sex, but not really...you'll see. Just a warning.)
Word Count: 3,448
Genre: Drama
Disclaimer: Owning humans are illegal in most parts of the world (and I can't afford their fabulousness)
Pairings: Shoichi/Yuji.
Summary: Post Kiiroi Namida/Yellow Tears. Shoichi meets Yuji ( Read more... )

words: 3001~4000, genre: movie/tv show, genre: drama, pairing: aiba/jun

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musosuru March 2 2010, 04:33:49 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww ;----; i feel so sorry for Shoichi >< That last bit got to me ^^; (him seeing him, the resemblance, the crying ><)

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reversemirror March 2 2010, 12:33:49 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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miwa_masaki March 2 2010, 07:12:17 UTC
uwaaah. so full of emotions. subarashii!

good job! i'm speechless

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reversemirror March 2 2010, 12:35:04 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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salwaphoenix March 2 2010, 15:41:49 UTC
"A family is hard work, Shoichi-san". I kinda had watery eyes there. I thought it resembles the whole bittersweet life of someone in a family.

I'd say someone without a family has some freedom emotionally that someone with a family could never get, and I admired Yuji and Tokie for not wanting to take it from Shoichi. But I guess in the end human always want things they don't have, and Shoichi was pained with not being able to be with his son.

I love the fic more towards the end *not like I'm immune to the hot junaiba up there xD* but the ending was really good :D

Great one here! *and don't worry, your smut will never get wrong xD*

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reversemirror March 2 2010, 18:24:05 UTC
Thanks for reading!

I loved the relationship between Shoichi and Yuji during the movie and just how much Yuji cared for him. Literally. I felt so bad whenever he was ignored or whatever and felt nothing but admiration when he married Tokie. Now that's a man.

Yeah my porn is such fail. orz. I'll get it right one day. |D

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kajalmonsta March 2 2010, 19:44:11 UTC
that was such a great idea and so beautifully written *.*

thank you very much for sharing^^

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reversemirror March 2 2010, 21:15:09 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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aoki_kitomi July 26 2010, 03:44:01 UTC
P.S.

Shoichi. When you are a father, no matter where your children are, you are never alone.

<3

i read this yesterday morning coz i couldn't sit and get my laptop to read some crack so i used my cellphone

searching through livejournal i found your fanfic and i read it

I had a fever that morning and this really made me feel better and at ease...;___; so touching

P.S.

Shoichi. When you are a father, no matter where your children are, you are never alone.

i really love that part <3333

excellent job!

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reversemirror July 29 2010, 03:44:03 UTC
Oh thank you for reading! I hope your fever is better!

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