Thank You for the Flowers

May 07, 2010 21:55

Title: Thank You for the Flowers
Rating: G
Word Count: 915
Disclaimer: Owning humans are illegal in most parts of the world (and I can't afford their fabulousness)
Pairings: Sakumoto
Summary: Meeting the parents...again.
Note 1: For nicefinalbeam 's a kiss, and all was said challenge.
Note 2: This is just so bad so I'll apologize in advance because I am like super ( Read more... )

words: 501~2000, genre: romance, rating: pg, genre: comedy, pairing: sho/jun

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hiro_chan May 8 2010, 02:18:07 UTC
hahahaha i love this XD!

i mean this is typical meet the parents fic which i love, and this being sakumoto makes it even better for me <3.

matsumoto-papa and sho's exchange when left alone in living room made me lol in real life haha.

lovely :):):).

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reversemirror May 8 2010, 02:22:48 UTC
Wow that was fast! xD Thank you so much for reading. Apparently chicken sexing is a skill "worthy of national pride" as Yoshinaga Fumi puts it since the Japanese came up with venting. xDD

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statr May 8 2010, 02:34:50 UTC
this is cute! the chicken sexer reaction of Sho is funny. XD

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reversemirror May 8 2010, 02:37:44 UTC
Thanks for reading! xD I'm not gonna lie, the entire purpose of this fic was so I can write that Jun's dad is a chicken sexer. Really. xDDDD

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iupdarlin May 8 2010, 02:56:17 UTC
This was so funny and cute!! :D

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reversemirror May 8 2010, 03:10:12 UTC
Thanks for reading! :D

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nicefinalbeam May 8 2010, 02:56:44 UTC
I really love the way you handled the subject matter here. It would have been easy to make Jun's family happy and accepting and maybe even just carbon copies of Jun himself. But you gave each one of them their own personality, and showed how Jun's family has more of a serious side to them. I like that the father is a bit so-so, but he doesn't deny that he loves his son and doesn't argue that his happiness is key.

And the kisses were definitely sweet! ♥ I think this worked with the pairing you chose, personally. Thanks so much for writing and sharing! :D

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reversemirror May 8 2010, 03:16:16 UTC
Wow thank you for the comment and the compliment. ♥ There isn't much about Jun's family anywhere so I did my best with it. xD So thanks again.

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fancyann1974 May 8 2010, 16:58:32 UTC
wonderful story...lol the chicken sexer part
glad his parents are so good
thank you for sharing

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reversemirror May 9 2010, 22:31:30 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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