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masja_17 December 18 2014, 16:36:34 UTC
Wonderful story with a lot of today's problems written into it. Thank you! And with sort of a happy ending.

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sonofabiscuit77 December 29 2014, 18:21:09 UTC
Aww, thanks so much. I'm really pleased you liked this.

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ephermeralk December 18 2014, 17:11:48 UTC
I absolutely loved this story! Love the sense of atmosphere you created, and the problems they had, especially with their families. I love that you didn't make light of it, that that they had a hard time telling their families, because that is hard. Loved the conversation with Dan, and the one at the end where Jared of course doesn't want Jensen to return to the military, but Jensen reminds him that's who he is, and what he wants to do, and that it is his choice to make.

and hot damn, love that first scene where he went down on Jared in the auto-shop.

Full of win, and Jared being a military wife. Just wonderful!

Thanks for sharing :D

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sonofabiscuit77 December 29 2014, 18:28:45 UTC
Thank you so much. I really wanted to go for the dead-end small-town atmosphere that was Jared's life, so I'm really pleased that worked for you.

Really glad you liked this!

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imaginecoolname December 18 2014, 21:28:22 UTC
Oh, this was amazing! An utterly intriguing fic, I loved the way you wove in the various issues, how you have such a subtle way of telling their story and all the tension, worry, doubts and hurt that came with it. I'm so glad you gave them a somewhat happy ending, though, it was perfect. As always, your writing is gorgeous and I adored every word. Thank you for this!

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sonofabiscuit77 December 29 2014, 18:29:43 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this. Thanks so much for reading.

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tebtosca December 19 2014, 03:40:52 UTC
God, I just love you so much. I'm all achey all over and even though I'm so glad they got some version of happily ever after, Jensen still could get sent back to war at any time.

Ack, just love it all

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sonofabiscuit77 December 29 2014, 18:30:59 UTC
Aww, thank you so much :DD That means a lot from you!

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crzymm3 December 19 2014, 03:52:47 UTC
You did an awesome, raw, emotion filled story. It was great to read. <3

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sonofabiscuit77 December 29 2014, 18:47:46 UTC
Wow, thank you! I'm so pleased you liked this.

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