[fanfic] A way you'll always be

Mar 05, 2011 20:58

Title: A way you'll always be
Author: sonofon
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Spain/Hungary (+ Austria)
Rating: PG
Warning: real boys don't cry!
Summary: In that fixture of life when the kaleidoscope starts going funky and Hungary is suddenly the immortal's answer to Mother Theresa.
Notes: relatively old and over-wrought with I don't even know, but it has a ( Read more... )

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leriacossato March 6 2011, 06:37:48 UTC
HA FIRST COMMENT

...i'll read this later i just wanted to be a whore and get here first 8)

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sonofon March 6 2011, 06:51:16 UTC
whore!!!

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leriacossato March 6 2011, 08:02:56 UTC
honhonhon

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chromatic_coma March 6 2011, 20:38:18 UTC
Wow, the language here is really beautiful and compelling and even though they're speaking in such vague terms their emotions come across so beautifully, and I could really feel the loss Spain was going through. ♥

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sonofon March 6 2011, 22:09:32 UTC
Emotion is something I've been trying to work on so I'm really happy to know that it made you feel that way. Thank you! &hearts

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sonofon March 6 2011, 22:10:14 UTC
so don't

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didgeridoodle March 9 2011, 16:26:51 UTC
Oh, you, hahaha!

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m_nemonica March 7 2011, 07:17:03 UTC
sdlfkj did you have to post this while i was away arguing with russia >:

WAS THAT A HILLS LIKE WHITE ELEPHANTS REFERENCE OR AM I JUST SEEING THINGS

also holland is such a beautiful hipster tbh
... )

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sonofon March 7 2011, 21:32:41 UTC
skjfl;a Hills Like White Elephants is such an amazing story I don't even but if I did make a reference, I unfortunately did not consciously do it ;___; YOU CAN KEEP THINKING THAT THOUGH

oh he issss!!

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disownmereturns March 7 2011, 15:42:30 UTC
This is so pretty o ^o I'd quote a bunch of things, but that'd be too much so here's my favorite

"I know he is. He has these thin fingers, when he spreads them out in a fan. They're perfect for playing the piano, they simply glide on the keys, black and white keys, don't they? I've fat fingers but no one ever comments on them. He never liked it when I went around the house naked. He said it was indecent and I used to think that was strange. I thought I looked fine, I just had fat fingers."



Also, hipster!Holland FTW

I'd gush over the amazing writing and interactions but everything is so next-door and under-the-sun yet not, it feels like I'm watching a sort of art film :'3

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sonofon March 7 2011, 21:30:44 UTC
o-oh my thank you so much! Spain's dorky obliviousness is really fun to write so I'm glad you liked it o///o

it feels like I'm watching a sort of art film

really super happy to hear that, thank you &hearts

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