this is your first song that isnt on that stupid structurefest that i hate. so naturally, i like it. the ending word is a little strange because it doesnt remind me of sunsets at all. but.. if it reminds you of sunsets.. then okay.
i actually, aside from the last line, really like it. it feels more genuine than everything else ive taken the time to read, which, unfortunately, isnt everything you have written.
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i actually, aside from the last line, really like it. it feels more genuine than everything else ive taken the time to read, which, unfortunately, isnt everything you have written.
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(want me to order a ticket?)
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