LJIdol, Topic 11: Open Topic

Jan 23, 2012 13:31


When it came time to return to her for the night, Nicola found that she was more than ready to crawl between the thinly threaded sheets and surrender to sleep. Her limbs were heavy laden, right down to how her fingernails pressed down into the bed of her fingertips. Despite this weighty exhaustion, she could feel the minutes tick past. A quarter of ( Read more... )

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LJIdol Topic 11: A Rec List. pingback_bot January 25 2012, 20:37:20 UTC
User alephz referenced to your post from LJIdol Topic 11: A Rec List. saying: [...] gives us a map for a very personal road. sonophax [...]

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team_jessie January 25 2012, 22:33:59 UTC
This is tense and atmospheric. If I were watching this scene on TV, I'd be watching it through a small space in my hands. :)

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sonophax January 25 2012, 22:39:35 UTC
I am delighted to hear it, that's a reaction I hoped for! :) Thank you for reading!

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muchtooarrogant January 26 2012, 05:13:40 UTC
Creepy, and very engaging. Well done!

Dan

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sonophax January 26 2012, 15:55:40 UTC
Thanks, I'm so pleased to hear it! :)

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whipchick January 26 2012, 06:34:52 UTC
Such creepiness! I like the contrast between her casual inner voice (stupid ninja fly) and the terrors of the dark corner.

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sonophax January 26 2012, 15:57:26 UTC
Thank you very much! :)

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myrna_bird January 26 2012, 17:55:47 UTC
I could feel that terrible insomnia, and the agony of just lying there, waiting and hoping for sleep to come.

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sonophax January 26 2012, 21:48:24 UTC
I imagine we've all had those sort of ghastly nights and they're never fun to wait through! Thank you for reading. :)

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