LJ Idol, Topic 18: "Iamthesea"

[sonophax]

The blazing summer sky skittered across the slate blue waves of the ocean as they crashed against the sandy Delaware beach. Up and down the stretch of land were multicolored beach towels, suits, and umbrellas. So many people, so relaxed and warm, and so unaware that they were in for a display of true greatness. With the patience of a saint, four-

Comments

[whipchick]

Love the ending - and you capture the child-imagination so well!

[sonophax]

Thank you very much!

[lawchicky]

Really well written!

[sonophax]

Thanks! :D

[notodette]

I love iamthesea. This is a great piece for her.

[sonophax]

I'm glad to hear it! I am hoping she enjoys it a little too. :)

[basric]

I thought it an excellent question. Well done.

[sonophax]

Hee, thank you!

[similiesslip]

First, as a mom, I am SO Glad you were ok.

Second, I LOVE how you wrote this. You truly do remember how we think as children. I especially like your comments about sunblock:)

[sonophax]

Thank you very much! :) I was really lucky that my family was paying attention to where I was! Thanks to them, we have a comedy instead of anything else!