The Dream World - Chapter Two (English)

[sontres]

            No one said anything. They just cried as we sat together in silence. What will happen to me?

As I thought about my future, I heard a knock on the door. "Come in," Mom said. The door opened, and a serious-looking man entered. He wore a gray uniform, and I knew immediately that he was someone important from the Central

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[thirteenmirrors]

I have hope that she may even live a few years as guardian. -- Eek! I loved this chapter. You have such a gift for storytelling, and I can't believe that you could write a story like this in Hebrew! Really impressive. I especially like how you describe the dreaming process itself -- the power of suggestion, like how Oren can't see their weapons because he could think they'll malfunction, and then they will. My dreams are always like that. It keeps occurring to me that it would be terrible if a certain thing happens, and then it does. Great job. Please post more, and I promise I'll read a little more quickly this time. :)

It was good to talk to you!

[sontres]

Thanks! I don't think I have a gift for storytelling or anything like that, but it's a fun way to practice my Hebrew. :) And if I think of it that way, I don't have to be critical of myself.

I actually had this particular dream... the part in the end where my grandma wouldn't leave the house really freaked me out.

It'll probably be a long while before I post more... there are just so many things I need to do. And for my Hebrew, my goal for now is to learn as many food words as I possibly can. My congregation is going to Israel in the spring, and I need to be prepared to stay vegan there. I guess my second goal is to get faster with speaking about and understanding numbers. That'll be important when I want to buy something. :)