Lies So Sweet, part one (full) | Final Fantasy X | Seymour/Yuna

[soo_hyeong]

Lies So Sweet | Final Fantasy X | Seymour/Yuna

Lies So Sweet, part 1 (full version)

Final Fantasy X

Seymour/Yuna

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Note: Just a short “what if” I wrote that has randomly turned into yet another full-blown multipart fic that will never get finished. Just throwing it out b/c of the sad lack of FFX fics in general right now (declining fandom?? TT_TT).

Comments

[animecrush]

I think this is a really wonderful piece. Love the prologue: Seymour whisking Yuna off in some sort of gallant-romantic way, but it's so disturbing and tragic at the same time.

Another place that really stuck out was Yuna's confrontation of Seymour. I think you wrote him perfectly in that scene. Also your discription of him watching over her as she sleeps, it's very "intoxicating". A very well thought and written piece, I can't wait to see more.

[soo_hyeong]

I'm glad the prologue came off that way, and happy to hear it wasn't too out-of-character. :) Thanks so much for your encouragement always. :))

[suspensionpoint]

first let me answer your question; "declining fandom??"
declining fandom.
partially dead fandom. :P

this is the first good, new ffx fic I've read in a looooong time.

With that said, I don't know you so I don't know if you're a Seymour/Yuna fan, or just writing a what-if fic.... but AAAAAHHH it's so disturbing. He creeps me out. :/

But he's still a very interesting character!
And you showcased that perfectly here, the fascinatingly creepy Seymour...

A very good start! I like it a lot! :)

[soo_hyeong]

Wow, thank you. I'm thinking about finishing all my unfinished FFX fics and publishing them soon, just because yeah, the fandom is so dead and needs some love. ;_;

Glad it's creepy and disturbing. Honestly, I don't think it's creepy enough, but I'm not a good enough writer to write it more scary while having everyone stay in-character. -_-;;

Thanks again.

[soo_hyeong]

And my thanks are late, too --;;

but thanks :)) ... glad to hear there's a few people still around ... I really haven't been around because of school and projects, but I really need to sit down and finish a fic or too. maybe i'll do so tonight ... and good luck on your fic, i need to look it up ...

wow!

[seleneavsss]

that's amazing! I really like your style.. it's simple yet so not ooc.. which is great! *hates oocness!* Seymour X Yuna is the only pairing I recommend for FFX, well, I also recommend Auron X Lulu.. but YXS sounds loads better

Re: wow!

[soo_hyeong]

Thanks... glad you got a kick out of it. :) I wrote a vaguely Auron/Lulu fic a little while ago, but it was pretty bad --;;