Snapshot to the Heart

Jan 14, 2015 16:10

ʚ Title: Snapshot to the Heart for chanyoelle
ʚ Pairing(s): Kyungsoo centric + Suho/Chen (parents)
ʚ Rating: PG
ʚ Warnings: kid Kyungsoo, kid Chanyeol, kid Jongin; side Xiuhan, side Taohun
ʚ Word count: 5,354 words
ʚ Summary: Kyungsoo and his Appa Joonmyun both miss Daddy Jongdae while he’s away on business, but trading snapshots of their days helps to ( Read more... )

m: chanyeol, day 3, m: kai, round 2

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bluedreaming January 16 2015, 07:17:27 UTC
I'm not really sure what to say...this was just so real. Like I'd swear you actually had a baby.... It was such a beautiful picture of a family in snapshots, all the tiny details that make up a life, friends and stories and bath time and ketchup on grilled cheese, the way things fall to the back of the refrigerator, how babies get sick and fussy and it hurts to see them cry, how sometimes it's hard to be alone.

♡ Throws flowers at you

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nachtegael January 26 2015, 12:46:05 UTC
haha I'm still laughing because me...with a baby...
<3 thank you for reading <3

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moon_things January 16 2015, 07:41:19 UTC
i'm literally crying on my floor rn this is too much
like joonmyun is team dad always but Actual Dad joonmyun is literally perfect om g
espesh this with making laps around the department store, that was just? rly real to me? anD LIKE it's joonmyun pov but the focus is still on babysoo, and this abt being full of love is makiNG ME FULL OF LOVE

and suchen dads. like. ok. youve done it youve ended me
i'm gonNA steamroll u after reveals i s2g this is the sweetest thing ive read in a while ಥ___ಥ

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nachtegael January 26 2015, 12:48:27 UTC
I'm sorry ;; it was not my intent to induce tears ;;
yeah, Joonmyun would be a not-quite-put-together but awesome parent, I think. thank you so much for reading and this lovely comment <3!!

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hearteulips January 17 2015, 10:23:18 UTC
It's been some time since I read a really heartwarming domestic au. This is such a good slice of life fic, and with baby Kyungsoo????? My heart positively melted.

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nachtegael January 26 2015, 12:49:37 UTC
ah, I'm so glad you liked it, thank you for reading!
yeah, I saw baby!soo in the prompt list and that was it, I had to write it ^^

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latinaeinstein January 17 2015, 17:09:29 UTC
this was so precious, oh man
i had to set my laptop down a couple of times just to recover
it's such a beautiful, adorable, moving au
and i was so terribly invested in their lives

i loved all the slice of life moments
grilled cheese sandwiches and bath time adventures and trips to the park and "i'm not a baby" and ahhh the contrasts between jongdae is away sleeping patterns and jongdae is home sleeping patterns
and that scene in the department store, with jongdae begging his baby not to cry, that almost broke me
i actually started cry (and i pride myself on my ability to not cry over fics tbh). it was jus so real

and i think that's what's most powerful to me??? these aren't real life experiences of mine, but they rang so true for me
you really feel his absence, which just underscores how integral he is to their lives

i just want to repeat that i was so invested

this line is probably my favorite line in the fic and that i've read in a while
Joonmyun can never resist the pleading, puppy eyes and curling smiles of either of his boys. ( ... )

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nachtegael January 26 2015, 12:55:58 UTC
thank you so much for this comment ;; I was worried the fic turned out kinda boring but slice of life is my favorite to read and it keeps sneaking into writing too, lately.
seriously, thank you for reading! *hands you some kleenex and sandwiches*

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chanyoelle January 19 2015, 17:56:57 UTC
Thank you so much for such a beautiful fic! I'm so weak for domestic au and baby soo turned me into a little puddle of goo by the end. I loved how you described kyungsoo as such an adorable toddler and how joonmyun kept sneaking pictures to send to jongdae. I'm at school rn but I'm asdfgghjk; so cute I love it tysm!!!

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nachtegael January 26 2015, 12:58:24 UTC
I'm glad it turned out ok, thank you for giving me the chance to write this! because dad Joonmyun <3 and baby!soo immediately stopped me in my tracks when I read through your prompts, because perfect~

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