/mouth drops open/ This story was just soooooo action filled. I like it lol. I like the twist at the end too but I should probably comment later with a proper one so spot for now.
I just want to say how much I liked the action scenes and the simple yet somehow complex plot of childhood best friends-slash-lovers growing up on the opposite ends of the justice spectrum? It's so The Classic (aka cliche meets kadi HAHAHAHAHA pls luv my analogy authornim uwu)
THE SEKAI WAS SO HEARTBREAKING I felt the friendship so much and the part where they separate UGH I know this is a sooheaven fic but the amount of time and effort you did to write Jongin's character was really great. I was (sort of) able to sympathize with him but at the same time MY KYUNGSOO FEELS WERE SO DRY. I'M SO THIRSTY FOR KYUNGSOO IN THIS FIC
WAS THIS ON PURPOSE HUH HUH? AS A KYUNGSOO STAN I AM ENRAGED!!!!
but really, even during the few moments Kyungsoo showed up, HIS PRESENCE FILLED MY VERY BEING (ew) but yeah! ESPECIALLY THAT LINE
"You are not my Jongin,” he said coldly. “So, who the fuck are you?”MY HEART??????? JUST??????? DAFUQ? /heart breaking
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This was such a thrilling ride! I mean there's gritty action and suspense and a marvelously twisty plot and all these elements are absolutely gripping. But that being said, these aren't the things I treasure most in any story I read. I'm always here for the people bc characters and the things that move them and the way they interact with other characters in a story - they are what give me life the most. And you certainly did not disappoint!! When jongin watches Kyungsoo in the yogurt shop and the sad half smile sehun gives him /wails
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This story was just soooooo action filled. I like it lol.
I like the twist at the end too but I should probably comment later with a proper one so spot for now.
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THE SEKAI WAS SO HEARTBREAKING I felt the friendship so much and the part where they separate UGH I know this is a sooheaven fic but the amount of time and effort you did to write Jongin's character was really great. I was (sort of) able to sympathize with him but at the same time MY KYUNGSOO FEELS WERE SO DRY. I'M SO THIRSTY FOR KYUNGSOO IN THIS FIC
WAS THIS ON PURPOSE HUH HUH? AS A KYUNGSOO STAN I AM ENRAGED!!!!
but really, even during the few moments Kyungsoo showed up, HIS PRESENCE FILLED MY VERY BEING (ew) but yeah! ESPECIALLY THAT LINE
"You are not my Jongin,” he said coldly. “So, who the fuck are you?”MY HEART??????? JUST??????? DAFUQ? /heart breaking ( ... )
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This was a ride. An enjoyable one wowowowowowow. I love the name play. At first i was like. Bipolar? Personality disorder??!?
But nope. Undercover agent too undercover. Maaaaaaaan this was good
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AT FIRST I THOUGHT I WAS READING TYPICAL BADBOY!JONGIN AND GOODBOY!KYUNGSOO THEN ALL OF A SUDDEN THERE WAS A PLOT TWIIIIIIIST OMG OMG OMG
U GOT ME THERE AUTHORNIM
LOVE LOVE LOVE 💕💕💕💕💕
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