The Succession of the Four Seasons. (The Crowing of the Roosters, the Love of Human Beings.)

Jan 16, 2015 15:12

ʚ Title: The Succession of the Four Seasons. (The Crowing of the Roosters, the Love of Human Beings.) for everyone ♡
ʚ Pairing(s): Kyungsoo/Baekhyun
ʚ Rating: R
ʚ Word Count: 2,750 words
ʚ Summary: Kyungsoo takes pictures of dicks and dreams of travelling the world.
ʚ Message for your recipient/author note: Dearest recipient ( Read more... )

day 5, m: baekhyun, p: baekhyun/kyungsoo, round 2

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skyroll January 20 2015, 03:23:17 UTC
i loved this!

i especially like kyungsoo's character and just being the cold, serious person he is towards relationships. and the fact that baekhyun of all people was able to make him change his mind.

Both Sehun and Jongin stare at him. "I think you're just weird, hyung."
yes

He likes his coffee black, like most of the clothes in his wardrobe.
i really like this line!

Baekhyun is sprawled on the bed with his legs wide open, fingering himself.
um yes?

also kyungsoo boner i see you

He smiles at Kyungsoo, and this time he scratches Baekhyun’s chin as Baekhyun starts unbuttoning Kyungsoo’s jeans, planting kisses all over Kyungsoo’s lower body.
so adorable and kind of hot

thank you for writing this lovely fic!

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iwantchocopie January 29 2015, 01:13:25 UTC

Aaaaah~ thank you for this lovely comment~
I'm really glad you enjoyed this.
Thank you so much!
♥♥♥

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read0write January 25 2015, 18:45:04 UTC
nice :3 not bad...
not sure i can say much else. i think i'm still processing it :P

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iwantchocopie January 29 2015, 01:13:55 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting~
Have a lovely day!

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onyu January 26 2015, 00:41:25 UTC
First of all, The Luna. How brilliant is that. ;) Second, aaah the way you portrayed the BaekSoo dynamics is so great! The push and pull is there, but there's also a bit of tenderness and uncertainty. And ugh Baekhyun making it his mission to make Kyungsoo happy, like he belongs or something. Istg this line, "I decided right away I was going to make you happy.", was such a killer. It's so great. It sounds so Baekhyun. :')

(Baekhyun fingering himself, though
and Kyungsoo coming from just getting Baekhyun off
flops on the floor and whimpers)

Thank you so much for writing this! This is so amazing. YOU are amazing ♥

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iwantchocopie January 29 2015, 01:16:35 UTC

Oh you~ you you you~
I'm sure you have no idea how much your words mean to me.
Thank you so much for reading my attempt to write baeksoo.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this!
♥♥♥

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anonymous September 26 2016, 00:35:40 UTC
oh wow, this is really good <3

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