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Dec 21, 2013 23:30


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ft: changmin/sooyoung, pg, ~3137w, au,
written after being inspired by a jiraiya/tsunade fic trololol, just random word vomit, but i still liked the way it turned out.
if you have any suggestions for the title, don't hesitate to tell me.
merry advance christmas, bamthegreat this random one-shot is dedicated to you. xoxo

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length: oneshot, rating: pg, pairing: changmin/sooyoung

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flow19 December 21 2013, 15:39:53 UTC
SPOT

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flow19 December 22 2013, 14:54:56 UTC
. . . KYUHYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN /bawls in such an ugly way/

You just really have such a way with words, dear! I mean, the imagery in this fic is just so dfhsakldhfasdhfa that it makes the story so easy to imagine and the more I go kjsdfhaskjdfhalksjdfhaj

AND IT ACTUALLY MAKES ME REALLY HAPPY TO SEE YUNHO IN THIS FIC. HAHAHAHAHAHA /squishes the leader/

AND THAT LINE IN THE END IS PERFECT LIKE YES, PLEASE, SHIM, DO NOT LEAVE HER SIDE AND BE HAPPY AND PERFECT TOGETHER AND WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

And what do you mean word vomit? This comment, my dear is word vomit and I'm sorry huhuhu OTL But never say that about this fic! It's really, really, really good, Kimmy and it's nice to see you writing again :D

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sooriforever December 22 2013, 14:57:20 UTC
hahahahah sorry for portraying kyuhyun in that way and breaking kyuyoung up DX
thank you so much for your kind words, unnie T__T i felt this was word vomit because it doesn't really have a definite plot to begin with hahaha and it just ended ...like that and idk LOLOL
yunho's practically the life saver in this fic huhuhu without him changsoo might not have happened DX

ily<3

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voicesinsync December 22 2013, 01:17:52 UTC
wow. I barely ate my tangyuan for breakfast while reading this open-mouthed. Will comment ltr!!(:

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voicesinsync December 22 2013, 14:40:41 UTC
ohmygoodness this is so awesome why kimmeh why your brain so aweshumz

“But if things work out, Changmin, then you would be able to live in the dream you’ve been dreaming of since you were eighteen.”

THIS OHMYGOD SOBS THE DREAM CHANGMIN. YOUR DREAM!!!!!

“But yours, would destroy me.”

Wow I swear my heart almost stopped beating rofl

Thanks for this awesome read(: Haven't seen any good changsoo in awhile, so thankyouu :>

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sooriforever December 22 2013, 14:50:15 UTC
HAHAH YES HIS DREAAAAAAAAMMMMMMM

tbh i was inspired to write this from that line eh. :P it was from another fanfic i read ft my naruto otp HAHA but sadly i closed the tab to that fic and i never found it again :(((((((

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changmin95 December 22 2013, 12:13:13 UTC
OH MY FEEEEELSSSS. I'M FEELING AGAIN OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS FEEL. Tears actually nearly like so close came streaming down my cheek when the thought of Changmin had died, I feel ya Soo. But I couldn't cry cause I'm surrounded by people who will question my insanity if they find out why I'm crying. This was written so beautifully <3. So glad they got together in the end! A happy ChangSoo is a happy me!

*gives you cookies because you are amazing* xoxox

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sooriforever December 22 2013, 14:49:15 UTC
omg thank you so much for the lovely comment :D *accepts cookies gratefully* I'm sorry I nearly made you cry though ahahahah and yesss happy changsoo, about time huh? :)

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kurdoodle December 23 2013, 20:11:26 UTC
Sooyoung turned to face him and within seconds, she tucked herself in the curve of his arm and closed her eyes, still not uttering a single word. Changmin froze immediately at this; the knots in his stomach tangled in complication-as if they weren’t complicated enough before.

“Uh…Sooyoung?”
“Go to sleep, Changmin.”

i SWEAR this foreshadowing?!?! aspdohfaglhf; can you just imagine them together, tangled limbs, hearts beating out of control, in love and just being absolutely perfect together? literally kimmie you had some pretty genius lines in here... the others have already quoted a few of my faves because UGH. FEELINGS.

changsoo!!11 i can imagine changmin and his unrequited love and then YUNHO TELLING HIM TO CHASE AFTER HIS DREAM /ugly sobbing YOU ARE TOO MUCH FOR ME
...bye

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sooriforever December 24 2013, 04:10:51 UTC
CRIES HANNAH<3 AKSJDKLSAJDKSAD thank you for reading akjsdlkasjdlk ikr yunho without yunho there wouldn't even be a changsoo T_T
I love you ;A;

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bamthegreat May 28 2014, 07:26:35 UTC
Sooyoung turned to face him and within seconds, she tucked herself in the curve of his arm and closed her eyes, still not uttering a single word. Changmin froze immediately at this; the knots in his stomach tangled in complication-as if they weren’t complicated enough before.

“Uh…Sooyoung?”
“Go to sleep, Changmin.”

OH MY GOD MY FUCKING FEELS KJNSJSANKJFNAKJFNSJFNFKJADBNKGJHFNKGAHFKLGRGFWB /sobs

“Let me get this straight.” Yunho placed his glass of alcohol on the bar and looked quizzically at his friend. “Sooyoung indirectly confessed that she loves you, and you ran away?”
I FEEL LIKE KICKING SHIM CHANGMIN TO NEVERWHERE

KANSFKANFKASFNSKANF

BUT OMG BB HUHUHUHUHUHHHUHUHUHUHU
THIS IS... HUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU I JUST CANT... HUHUHUHU I LOVE YOUUU

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sooriforever May 28 2014, 13:39:50 UTC
HAHAHAH YOU FINALLY READ THIS OK HI UNNIE ILY TOO XD

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