My version of after episode 15 - One Shot

[sophie_sian_fan]

this is my first fiction if brittana, i have done some with sophie and sian before though.

this is what i want to happen after brittany broke santanas heart! (One Shot)

Comments

[short1_86]

Good concept =], but you really need to use proper grammar and spell-check... would make it a much more enjoyable experience. It's really hard to read as you have it now.

[sophie_sian_fan]

thanks, but i tend to write how people would say the words and stuff, like in the book "trainspotting" if you have read it?