Lj idol: food memory

Dec 01, 2011 20:00

The interview takes place in an office. The office is sparsely furnished. The teenager reluctantly seats herself in the only chair facing the desk at which an official looking woman regards her curiously. After an eternity of silence, the woman finally speaks ( Read more... )

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marstokyo December 4 2011, 18:13:58 UTC
Oooh I liked the cliffhanger! I liked the whole thing!

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soprano1790 December 4 2011, 20:25:19 UTC
Thank you! I like cliffhangers too.

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it's true. ellakite December 5 2011, 04:29:34 UTC
Smells and tastes are powerful memory triggers.

Can't wait to hear the rest of this tale.

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Re: it's true. soprano1790 December 5 2011, 04:34:22 UTC
Good... I was hoping so... I had remembered reading that in a psychology book somewhere. :) So I just went with it. I wanted to be creative.

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baxaphobia December 5 2011, 17:50:03 UTC
Oh I didn't expect the ending! Nicely done!

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soprano1790 December 5 2011, 21:37:10 UTC
Neither did I! Thank you.

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nyxocity December 5 2011, 20:18:49 UTC
Oooh! Nice reveal AND cliffhanger at the end! :)

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soprano1790 December 5 2011, 21:34:46 UTC
Thank you!

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karmasoup December 5 2011, 22:34:18 UTC
Very interesting. Smell is the most powerful memory trigger. Wonderful to be able to put it to work. (Also, Tiramisu is my favorite dessert)

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soprano1790 December 5 2011, 23:22:51 UTC
Thank you. I had remembered reading that somewhere and wanted to use it for this. I've actually never had it, but I love the smell of it.

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