Ack! She's Back!

[tortura_chan]

Hi, guys! I'm still a little new to this comm, and I feel bad for not being regular, but i return with more of my fic, plus a bit of an extra

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[lblikesbagels]

Ahhhh, the second one, omg. x,jbfklsblsd <-- creepy fangirling.

Seriously, crap man. I love your stuff. I will be getting into your longer fic shortly. D:

p.S. Chuck Palahniuk is my hero. :3

[tortura_chan]

Thanks a lot. The comments keep me going, and convince me I'm NOT just wasting my time and procrastinating. XD

P.S. Yeah, I'm going to marry him. He just doesn't know it yet.

[wickedorin]

I can see what you mean when you say it feels a little "different"... I can't describe it, though. It doesn't feel separate from the others, just... like a corner's been turned. Sort of. ...I'll be amazed if that was at all coherent. Point being, I'm still greatly enjoying the story.

And the second... god, that hurts. Brilliantly. (I'm also a big fan of Chuck Palahniuk, but I haven't had the chance to get to his newer stuff yet. That shall have to be remedied when I get more time.)

[tortura_chan]

I hope to have time to write a few more Chuck-inspired drablle-ma-bobs, since Sinner is getting close to a closing point. I pray more will come soon. Thanks for the comment. ^_^

[vainglory]

Wow. Amazed at that second piece. Reminded me of a prose, and those are just genius pieces of work. Very nice.

"I wish I knew things the way mothers know things the way lovers know things the way children know things you never know again."

- This has got to be my favorite line. Adored how it made you think.

Keep it up. I'm very interested in seeing more. :)

[tortura_chan]

Thank you very much.

Wow.

[sweetmacabre]

Wow.
The second one is amazing! And I don't mean that in a fangirl way (even though I am one xD) but in a that's-an-example-of-excellent-writing way.

It was captivating, but more so by his thoughts than his actions.

I enjoyed reading it.
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-Roxas.

Re: Wow.

[tortura_chan]

Thanks you so much. ^_^

<3
-Axel