Comments | soraya2004: FICLET: [Stargate: Atlantis] Hunter (G)

soraya2004

FICLET: [Stargate: Atlantis] Hunter (G)

May 28, 2006 19:34

Author: Soraya
Title: Hunter
Series: Scenes from a courtship
Rating: G
Genre: Pre-Slash
Pairing: Beckett/Dex
Disclaimer: Not mine, Wright and Cooper own Stargate Atlantis etc.

Summary: When Ronon stops running, he doesn't give up hunting

( Hunter [G] )

carson-ronon, slash, series-scenes-courtship, stargate-atlantis, rated-g, fanfic

Comments 12

jakisbishlygay May 29 2006, 01:49:22 UTC

I loved it!!

I especially like how Ronon sees Carson and the compassion he gives and craves. Well done!

soraya2004 May 30 2006, 15:54:28 UTC

*g* Thank-you for the lovely feedback! I like the idea that Ronon would be the one to spot that a carer also needs caring for, and I think these are two people, who compliment each other very nicely.

Thanks again, and hugs, Soraya ;)

jakisbishlygay May 30 2006, 16:01:14 UTC

*hugs*

jalabert May 29 2006, 13:47:45 UTC

I like several things about this story, but the thing that most impresses me is the way you've elevated Ronon from the rather one-dimensional, simple man he's to often depicted as to a more discerning, somewhat romantic man...with excellent taste!

Brava!

soraya2004 May 30 2006, 14:35:08 UTC

Thanks so much for the great feedback! *g* I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story, in particular the depiction of Ronon. I often wonder what choices he might have made for his life if the Wraith didn't exist - who he might be as opposed to what necessity has made him. And, that's something I plan to explore in future fics!

Thanks again, and hugs, Soraya ;)

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soraya2004 May 30 2006, 15:34:19 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you liked it! ;) I guess our experiences will always colour our perception of things, so I like to think Ronon might view Carson differently. Then, there's that old question of 'who comforts the comforter', and IMO Ronon's clearly the man for the job! *g*

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soraya2004 May 30 2006, 14:17:30 UTC

There will be one, and in it Ronon's definitely going to enjoy finding out! *eg* This ficlet (plus other ficlets to come) runs in parallel to a Carson/Ronon story I started a while ago, which I'm determined to rescue from the WIP folder of doom. So, yes, there's more to come! ;)

severusslave May 30 2006, 16:50:15 UTC

Oh, wow, darling! That was very good! I'd like to see what has to happen to make Carson see. :)

soraya2004 May 31 2006, 19:57:09 UTC

*grins* Thank-you, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! And, rest assured, Carson will definitely enjoy the results of seeing Ronon! ;)