Comments | sorcha425: Prophecy.

sorcha425

Prophecy.

Dec 01, 2009 22:18

The Doctor was aware of an added consciousness and stiffened in response. His senses had an extension, his thought opened as if shared with another, yet he couldn’t quite grasp the additional thoughts of this mind parasite ( Read more... )

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tempusdominus10 December 2 2009, 03:40:29 UTC

Oooo. Interesting Premise! Might, I daresay, be a sequel in the works? PWEEEEZE?

sorcha425 December 2 2009, 23:10:49 UTC

Hmmm. I wasn't planning a sequel, but I would like to know how I could end the episode, now that I've been brazen enough to change it this far ;0) We'll see...

denshi_no_ultra December 2 2009, 20:03:32 UTC

Nice fic! I just finished watching season 4 yesterday, and it was interesting to see a different perspective on the events in the last episodes. I could not help feeling sorry for Doctor II in your fic - all these conflicting feelings of a Time Lord and a human... I really liked the way you wrote his thoughts.

sorcha425 December 2 2009, 23:14:12 UTC

Thank you! Actually, I found myself feeling sorry for the human Doctor while I wrote; must be my catharsis. You don't see enough of him to get connected in the episode. I don't think he got the best treatment in canon, so I'm glad you felt for him in this.

denshi_no_ultra December 3 2009, 13:12:46 UTC

Yes, but in the series human Doctor has it better than the real Doctor - he can stay with Rose and be happy (well, relatively happy, knowing that he destroyed all Daleks), while the real Doctor will have to be alone, so I suppose I didn't feel too sorry for him there. In your fic it is different - he doesn't just kill Daleks, he sacrifices himself to save everyone, and that is more heroic.