LJ IDOL Sudden Death Write Off: Bitten by the Sailing Bug...

[sorchawench]

The ring of a bell comes through a bank of thick mist. The creak and groan of wood and rope come clearer and the calls of men sound out and seem to come from nowhere

Comments

[ellison]

Ooh I really like this, it's so easy to picture it from your description, and it's suspenseful and captivating. Well done!

[sorchawench]

Thank you!

[md_meezer]

I was grabbed by the first line and wanted more. very captivating.

[sorchawench]

Thank you very much!

[static_abyss]

I love the the progression of the weather in your story. It was beautifullly descriptive.

[sorchawench]

Thanks!

[tsuki_no_bara]

this is really vivid - excellent descriptions! it's enough to make me feel kind of cold and damp and windblown.

[sorchawench]

Thank you!

[furzicle]

Been there, done that. Nicely described.

[sorchawench]

Thank you!