I am SO going to hell.

[sordidlilthing]

[Part Three of my "Religious" Poetry Series. Check former posts for first two.]

Songs of Praise

by Mushroom

God taught me how to worship;
By running my gaze down the length of your spine ‘till the teasing edges of your trousers, observing the way your clothes cling to you
like second skin. She listens when I roll the R r r r s of your name with

Comments

[watermirror120]

At least you're a better poet than me. OHOHOHOHO.

Anyways, this is really nice. Someone might get shot by the Roman Catholic Church. You turned God to a "she" here. Haha. I feel the "sacred feminine" thing here. *cackles*

This is actually a good read. Just smutty.

Sophia. Ennoia. The Sacred Feminine. woot. ^_^

[mushroom18]

Haha, I'm happy you noticed the "She" thing. That's my feminism for you.

Can you believe that my former Religion teacher (who's a NUN) was the one who gave the idea of this poem? She told me that sex is pleasurable because God made it so, that it is his gift for us. Basically, if you look beyond the smut, you can see an act that is actually sacred, no matter how horny the two are.

[watermirror120]

Oh yeah. That's actually kinda right. Blame it on Dan Brown!!!^^

[mahiwaga]

lol dan brown. yeah. like, sex ritual much? XD

[mahiwaga]

and yes, lovely mushroom, you are so going to hell for writing such beautiful piece. XD

[mushroom18]

At least it's beautiful...? XD Haha, thanks so much!