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[sordidlilthing]

Syzygy

A/N: Alternate Universe of Defeating Commander Jonathan Johnson and the "I'm in love with a geek boy" strips. Just a short story I had to pass in Sir Flores' class (maybe I shouldn't mention him here, hehe)

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I was a bit disoriented while I read the first few sentences, probably because I'm not used to them being written in Dave's first person limited POV. XD I liked the real, not-emo and clueless Colin better, although the way he blubbers about Dave's mass-over-volume-ness is cute. :3 I love Dave's voice in this. And the last line!

...And the title is so apt. It implies so much. XD

[sordidlilthing]

Thank you very much! xD Colin's a bit of a potty-mouth in this alternate universe, which tickled me a bit. I just wanted Colin to make the first move and Dave to keep on denying things. You know, for a change xD

Thank you very much! You haven't forgotten me ♥