[xxxholic] The Doumeki Shizuka Files

[sordidlilthing]

Title:The Doumeki Shizuka Files, or What Really Happened in the Music Room (as Recorded, Researched and Compiled by Investigative Underground Journalist Kumo Maki)
Author: Mushroom
Author's Notes: Inspired by episode #49 of the anime Card Captor Sakura, which is entitled Sakura and the Dangerous Piano. Thanks to star_flare for the beta-read! The style is

Comments

[cheloya]

*cackling* Oh, you certainly pinned them - Himawari, and Watanuki, and the school environment. I like the way your interviewer comes to the conclusion. ♥

[sordidlilthing]

Oh, I'm relieved that you think so! Thanks so much! :D

[dorrie6]

This is really charming. *heart*

[sordidlilthing]

Thanks for the comment! :D

[kataren]

Lol at 7's opening, & 8 FTW!

You write moar? ^_^

[sordidlilthing]

I do write a lot of xxxHolic, actually. But most of them are drawings. xD

[vinval]

Guh. I wish I had the brainpower to review this properly. I had to read it twice before I figured out who was saying what, and then a third to figure out what was going on.

I really liked the style and would love to see more fic like this. It was really intriguing and I alternately lol'd and aww'd, especially at: I love you, I know I need you, but I can’t depend on you, I never will, and you deserve someone who can. Because if Watanuki ever said that, I wouldn't know whether to cry or fangirl.

Oh, and I really loved this line: The moment he stepped on the shai and faced the target, we knew he was in too deep. I loved the whole description of archery and then that line just made me go, Oh. Oh, Doumeki. I just, askjdl &hearts&hearts&hearts The sound of my brain breaking. :D

And now I want to meet the archery guy. Everyone is making a big deal out of it. Everyone’s asking questions. But all you need to do is to watch Doumeki-san. Seriously, observant-archer-boys are totally my type.

I would love to see more fic in this vein.

[vinval]

Oh yes, and #8 is TOTALLY FTW, YES.

[sordidlilthing]

I love you, I know I need you, but I can’t depend on you, I never will, and you deserve someone who can. Thanks for pointing that out! ♥ I really thought a lot about that line, it's something I think Watanuki feels about Doumeki. That he can't depend on him because he's scared, or something.

I spent a lot of time revising the archer boy too, so I'm glad he sounded good!

Thank you very much! ♥

[erase_away]

Haha! That was so funny. My favorite was number 7 with rabid Doumeki stalker girl. Great job. This style is quite interesting, I'd want to try something like that.

<3

[sordidlilthing]

Thanks! The rabid stalker girl IS scary, but I had fun writing her. xD

[tomoyohime8]

i agree. the rabid stalker girl was great. i love the fangirls. especially imagining their faces upon discovering that doumeki is actually taken. ^^

this needs more. could you? would you? ^^