Nervosa

[sordidlilthing]

NervosaSo he told me, look man, you gotta eat. You’re practically skin and bones. Your collarbone is seemingly carved with perfection, elbows and knees ripping the threads that hold your flesh together, and your eyes are round, your cheeks convex. You gotta eat

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[star_flare]

I find this creepy because I've been thinking about falling into the anorexic eating pattern until my digestive system fully reboots. XDDD

But I like the transition. From the whole you gotta eat thing (and the fresh descriptions), which is perfectly normal, until you move on. (I'm just wondering, did the other person see this coming since he didn't even put up any resistance? Or at least, not while the narrator's concerned, since he's too caught up with the eating anyway. XD)

[sordidlilthing]

Yes, "he" does not resist. xD

HEY. Don't do that to yourself. Take care of yourself. (I know I don't practise what I preach, what with my underweight problems, but you really have to eat more.)

[empress_izzy]

Great. Exceddingly morbid (it honestly turns my stomach) yet I cannot stop reading it over and over for the life of me. Those strings of words just... yeah. They're powerful descriptions.

[sordidlilthing]

Oh wow, I just found this comment now. :o! Thank you so much for reading! ♥