Notes to the Lilyflower (Or, Why Her World is Round)

[sordidlilthing]

I.

It began two hundred thousand years ago (six months ago)
why should it end? Or rather,
how should it. There are those who can break another and sleep at night. I
remember the Queen and the Other, the world
talked behind their backs, but they're still alive.
And me?

II.

Ten Points for the best yet, perfezione as you would put it, almost

Comments

[star_flare]

I'm in love with your prose. *___* And this style of writing is the kind I want to pull off. It's fragmented, and I admit to not understanding the whole thing, but it packs a lot of punch.

Quote:nothing to add, nothing lacking, a beauty unfathomable, why that's quite ugly isn't it.
I don't know this Vitruvius person, but. Yeah. That's a great way of putting it.

I love the last paragraph. I want to quote it. XDDD

[sordidlilthing]

Thank you very much, sweetheart! You are too kind. ♥ ;_;

Vitrivius is one of those old farts. LOL

Go ahead and quote it honey. It is quite obvious that the whole thing was made for that line. xDxDxD