Lessons

[sordidlilthing]

He taught me many things - for example, why one must always think things through. Alone, at first, then with the acknowledgment of others. We had it made. Our apartment was tidy and us and now it’s bare and I don’t remember where it went. He was there until the beginning, always a saving voice. It was always about the others. He could cure

Comments

[ampersandals]

Good to see you posting here again! The prose is lovely (my favorite line, I think, is but her patience spilled over, slowly, like a blanket of seas., and the 3rd paragraph reads like poem). I love how the piece just glides and takes me with it (the length is very appropriate for this purposes), smooth as butter.

[sordidlilthing]

Hi sweetie! I'm extremely glad that you still watch this little thing. Thank you!

As for the story, I wrote "I can't wait to fall in love" first before trying to explain why. I really do think so. ;P

[sordidlilthing]

A comment from you, my dear, is precious. A positive one moreso. THANKS HUN!

[neiarc]

Very nice. I approve. :D

[sordidlilthing]

Awww, thanks hun!