Comments | sordidlilthing: This is what you get, when you fall in love.

sordidlilthing

This is what you get, when you fall in love.

Sep 02, 2005 23:02

Darling

by MushroomSorry Darling ( Read more... )

poetry

Comments 8

liquidskin08 September 2 2005, 15:30:51 UTC

Awwwww *sniff sniff*

I got so emotional reading this one... halo-halo talaga feelings ko ngayon... I love this!!!!!

sordidlilthing September 11 2005, 11:01:51 UTC

Glad to be in charge of evoking that feeling in you!

chastity_rowan September 2 2005, 15:49:10 UTC

Ha?

Never was good with poetry.

sordidlilthing September 11 2005, 11:02:38 UTC

NGORK. You don't get it? :(

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sordidlilthing September 11 2005, 11:02:52 UTC

Oooh, thank you very much! XD

star_flare September 19 2005, 10:57:17 UTC

I wake up sleepy, and
Fall asleep very much awake
Darling, this is your doing.
This is how you made me.
I love this stanza, for some reason. XD

in your handiwork.
Brilliant metaphor.

And the end is beautiful. In a weird sort of way.

Put it into a tune. I bet it'd make a good song~~~
I love the theme of "waking". You have a way with words. Have I ever told you that?

star_flare September 19 2005, 14:51:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm quite proud of this piece as well. :3 (It's a first!)

There are only two poems I'm very proud of. This, and a poem I made back when we still had misanthroposdotnet. I think I'll go find it right now. XD

sordidlilthing September 19 2005, 14:51:53 UTC

XDXDXD Woops, it's me.