Bandslash fic: Wide Open Spaces (MCR, Frank/Bob, R)

[sori1773]

So! Bandslash continues to eat my brain. Apparently. :D

Wide Open Spaces
Bandslash, My Chemical Romance, Frank/Bob
3500 words, R
Summary: Weirdly, it makes Bob think of home and growing up; everything all mixed up, and jumbled up, and nothing that was actually his anymore, just huge piles of theirs.

Much love to audrarose for all the usual reasons

Comments

[audrarose]

I have so much love for this! The end made me so happy -- just this little surge of joy for the two of them being together and Bob not being lonely anymore. Perfect and wonderful and yes! :DD

[sori1773]

hee! thanks so much, hon! :DDD

(carpets. bleh!)

[lily_liedtome]

That it one sexass icon, lady. *grins*

This story is fabulous, by the way. There should be more bob/frank in my life.

One little thing: You're bed is awesome, <--- that should be your not you're

[sori1773]

thank you so much!

and thanks for catching the error! all fixed! :D)

[spikedluv]

Awww! I like how Frank insinuates himself into Bob's life, and fills up all his empty places, and the smile that's just Bob's, and the ending, which is just lovely. I loved the Peter vs Claire argument, the crockpot and the fact that they totally sucked at video games. *coff* I'm still not here, though. *g* But if I was, I might point out these:

"You're bed is awesome," - your
one the of the best guitarists off all fucking time - extra 'the' and 'off' should be 'of'
Frank's sitting on the couch, shoulders slumped, head in his hands, defeat screaming in the slump of his shoulders and the long sad line of his neck tilted back and resting against the back of the couch. - I had a tough time picturing Frank sitting slumped with his head in his hands AND neck tilted back. But, um, that could be just me. *g*
embarrass him with a a sombrero - too many 'a's

Still. Not. Reading. Bandslash. *g*

[sori1773]

ha! you can't pretend you're not here anymore! :DDD thanks for reading, hon!

(and for catching the typos. :D fixing them!)

[vivilicious]

Awwwwwww... that made me so happy. Put a big smile on my face :)

Thanks for writing this! <333333333333333333333333333

[sori1773]

yay! thanks so much! :D

[secrethappiness]

I really, really like this. I like how Frank just shows up and moves in and Bob just goes with the flow until he's ready to take it up a notch.

[sori1773]

I'm so glad you liked it! thanks!