Fanfic: This Life and the Next (Part Three: Chapter Seven)

[soricha]

Chapter Seven:

The land was to become cruel to them, their blanketing skies lit with storms, filled the valleys with rain. Ari’s body had weakened, her voice no longer filled with joy, her eyes pale, her heart slow. She struggled to waken, her chest rattling with a cough, her head heavy. Callie lit warm fires, made teas of herbs but could only

Comments

[mumblingm00se]

Wow. I just read all of part three together, and part way through this last chapter I had to stop for a bit as I could not see the screen through the tears. I might well be a big softy, but consider that a compliment lol Nice job.

...The next life sounds interesting :Op Looking forward to seeing where you take them next.

[possibility2]

This story is just so painfully beautiful...of course I'm bawling like a baby right now, but I kind of needed the release anyways. As soon as Ari got sick I started crying and couldnt stop from there in. I loved this setting, picturing callie as a native american was hot. And I loveeee that you conveyed their love without them every really communicating through words...yet even without understanding eachothers language, you could feel how they felt for each other. This was so bittersweet...that as much as Callie loved her, she was a free spirit, and ari finally understood that and loved her enough to let her go. I can't tell you how much I love this story, I can't wait for the next part. Thank you so much for sharing such awesome stories with us.

[cruez2788]

I have fallen into a happy little bubble with this story. Even though I cry everytime they get pulled apart I always get excited when a new story starts because I know they are that much closer to the life where its finally okau for them to be together. This is by far my favorite Callie/Arizona story by far and I cannot wait for the next life to begin :)

[cruez2788]

Also all through this last life I could help but see Callie as Pocahontas.

[luvsara]

I can't wait for more. thanks again!