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sorrowdead

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Oct 22, 2005 12:28

Wow. It's been a long while since I've finished anything I've written. I have two FFTL stories I need to post here, but I'll do it seperately. Here's my newest. I wrote and completed it today. I wrote it on notebook paper and in green ink. You'll understand once you've read the title.

Title: Blue and Yellow
Pairings: None really, but some Matt/ ( Read more... )

blue and yellow, fftl, sonny/matt, green

Comments 8

_cyanidedrinker October 24 2005, 21:32:19 UTC

Aww ^_^ Cute! I love FFTL slash stories. <3
And I'm pretty much in love with your icon. Best music video ever. ♥

sorrowdead October 27 2005, 04:10:08 UTC

=] Thx, dear. Your icon is awesome and so is the Note to Self video, though I haven't seen it in a while. =[

linkinparkdance October 25 2005, 01:07:32 UTC

i like it! i havent been to lj in sooo long. so thats the first slash ive read on here, be proud =P

ex_argh October 25 2005, 05:55:55 UTC

aw its was cute and good... but (sorrry x.x;;;) i think it was a little too rushed/unrealistic at the end. i just... dont think matt would go from angry (running from sonny) to suddenly saying he loved him back... ^^; you could always make matt run from him again and for example stomp around the school angrily cursing sonny (doing lots of thinking bla) and then have the bit where he said he loves him :P sorry. not trying to take over your fic, but rather help.

i understand if you want to poke my eyes out x.x i'm not so good at the constructive criticism :x

other than that, i really liked this fic :D and the ending about the blue and yellow and the kiss etc, was beautiful. very nice, :D
♥

sorrowdead October 27 2005, 04:08:52 UTC

Thx. Feedback is always appreciated. I didn't like the ending either. I did rush it a bit. I had intended on Matt holding out a little longer and having this whole battle against himself for being gay or whatever, but I got too lazy to drag the story out. I plan on fixing this up in the near future. Thanks again, dear.

I'm glad you like the ending. I had to mention the title somewhere. LoL. =]

ex_argh October 27 2005, 07:19:07 UTC

hehe ;) lol i get ultra lazy too sometimes :P

well the way u included the title really rocked ;D

autopia_luvz_me October 27 2005, 02:07:34 UTC

that was really good.
i really liked the ending and the way it was compared to something so unrelated, but so relevant...if that makes sense
hope to see more by you =]
~Monty

sorrowdead October 27 2005, 04:11:37 UTC

Thank you. =] I'm glad you liked the ending. And that did make sense...somewhat. LoL.