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[sorrowdead]

Heck yes. I finished the second chapter and I'm working on the third. I really want to finish this.

Title: Bitter Pill
Pairing: Sonny x Travis
Rating: PG-13 for now I suppose
Summary: Oh, he was a beautiful broken boy with his cut up wrists and bruises. Oh, he's a hero with a Jack Daniel's tee and he's going to save that broken boy. Yes, he's

Comments

[sorrowdead]

Thanks.
I'm glad.
I heart your icon.
kthxbye. =]

[iintoxxiicatedd]

hmm.

This makes me super happy ♥

[sorrowdead]

Yay. =]
I like your icon.

[_cyanidedrinker]

Awww! Lovely.

Everyone being mean to poor Sonny nearly broke my heart, but then I was all giddy when he was nervous around Travis. So cute ♥.

This is a great story. I can't wait for more <3

[sorrowdead]

Aww. Thanks, grrl.

Yeah. LoL. Is your heart okay now, dear?
Did you like that? LoL.

Thank you. I should have the next chapter up soon.
<3

[sleeping_fishes]

I like the idea of this story, but isn't this chapter exactly like the first chapter of SLC?

http://www.livejournal.com/community/slashypunkboys/2475609.html#cutid1

Maybe try and think of something more original.

[cokehead]

Not everyone reads every story written.

And really, if you think about it- alot of the stories that come across these communities are like identical twins. Only a few phrases and perhaps a change in pairings to tell the difference.

I'm not trying to be a hag or anything [really I'm not], just letting you know. Because I've read stories that are exactly the same, minus a change in pronouns. And you can only change but so many things with a story that has the same plot line before it just gets ridiculous, especially in a story like this where 'emo' Sonny is the main character.

This is a good story and it's only the second chapter..
I think she's doing a splendid job.

[sorrowdead]

Thank you, sweety.
I love you for saying this. =]

[sleeping_fishes]

It's not the fact that it's similar, I know that a lot of stories on here are very similar. The point is that it's almost exactly the same. There is no way that this could happen by chance. I liked this story, I thought the first chapter was good, and I liked the idea of it, but this chapter lost me because it's blatantly copied from another.

[trashyglamourx]

Sonny's boss is a bitch.

[sorrowdead]

Yeahh. LoL.
He is.

I heart your icon, btw. It makes me think of Bambi. =]

[trashyglamourx]

Oh gee. I re-read that. I sounded like a moron.

Thank. I like my icon too.