You have a strong hold on Applejack's voice! My biggest crit would just being around? You kind of apped Applejack then went on hiatus, and I definitely get wanting to have some time off when you're burned out, I just am confused by the timing.
The other thing is phonetic writing. Obviously people will write "ain't" or leave off letters sometimes, but they don't necessarily write "fer" out on paper, even if they'd say it. That's more the thing for logs.
I realize it was bad timing on my part to go on hiatus right after apping, but there was a couple of games I wasn't feeling and SH was one of them. I was hoping a little time off to re-energize would help my want to RP. I'm thinking about coming off early since I didn't succeed in keeping up with NaNo.
I'll take the phonetic writing into consideration! I can remember getting the same crit as Lavi, so I was like 'is this too much? is this too little?' So thanks for pointing that out.
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I didn't get much practice with her before I apped so crit would be very much appreciated!
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The other thing is phonetic writing. Obviously people will write "ain't" or leave off letters sometimes, but they don't necessarily write "fer" out on paper, even if they'd say it. That's more the thing for logs.
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I'll take the phonetic writing into consideration! I can remember getting the same crit as Lavi, so I was like 'is this too much? is this too little?' So thanks for pointing that out.
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