sometimes you just need a poke in the right direction

[sosayethallie]

toxictattoo wanted a first kiss for our RP couple Bruce and Yazoo, but Bruce and Yazoo have had a first kiss. Memorable, stirring, and OMFG hot, and I couldn't rewrite it

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[quarterturn]

It's been a while since I've read original fiction online, but damn, this is definitely something I want to keep up with. You say you think you'll have it done by September? YES.

I think the best part of is that Christian comes across as arrogant without being cheesy, which is the mistake of most writers I find that try to write anyone arrogant. He's believably arrogant.

♥

[sosayethallie]

Now I have to have it done by September. *whimpers*

I'm glad you like, honey. Thank you so much for the encouragement. ♥

LJ will only let me post in small bits, so you'll get hammered with lots of comments.

[toxictattoo]

[happy!flail]

Oh. My. God. Allie, if I started to number all the reasons I love you, I'd be here all morning and I do need to get ready for work at some point...right after I reread everything for Christian and Sariel. [firm nod]

That I love Christian and Sariel goes without saying, but I'll say it anyway.

GOD I LOVE THESE TWO! Christian is so goddamned sexy he's breathtakingly painful. Sariel is liquid sex poured into his leather.

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[toxictattoo]

I realized that in order to write a first kiss, I'd need to figure out the plot of the story finally - not sure who was the devious conspirator there, Jan or my subconscious.

meh heh heh heh. [halos]

I believe I will actually meet my self-imposed deadline of September 1 on it. *hoorays!*

Hoorays, indeed! Double hooray, I say! Hoorayhooray!

[glee] I know you're writing this with an eye to publication and this makes me happy for many many reasons. I'll always pretend in my head it's all for me and my own selfish gratification. heh.

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[sosayethallie]

You may pretend. And you may also find yourself in the dedication. ;)

Thanks, babe. You're wonderful. A fabulous friend and really...just...thanks. ♥

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[toxictattoo]

Whatever, he'd use a condom and if the kid didn't like sucking latex, he'd find someone else.

This is just...looking for the words. Christian is so full of self-awareness and confidence, maybe arrogance but that's what I love about him. It just sets up the entire thing so beautifully.

... somehow the combination screamed masculinity - and lethality, but given what he hunted, that turned Christian on, not warned him off.

Guh. Unf. Guhandunf. Man oh man, how hot is this? Hot. Very hot. And again, in so few words, tells us who Christian is.

[ladyjaida]

Oh awesome. I really can't wait to read more. I love these characters and I love the chemistry between them. Not to mention that I get all the good stomach clenches reading this...

[sosayethallie]

Awww, Jaida. Thank you! I'm so glad you like my boys.

This one, it's just straight up m/m erotic romance. I wonder what you'll think of "the novel formerly known as Serenity"...

*hug* Thank you so much for the encouragement, hopefully future B/S buddy!

[annkiri]

Congratulations Baby! This looks AWESOME! Christian is HOT! Sariel is HOT! Your writing? HOT! *g*

*twirls you* Yay for writing! :)

[annkiri]

*cough* also, I am reading your lovely character bits (which are made of awesome and I totally am loving getting to know these guys/boys/men and their strength and fears) but I think some of them are on a filter and I can't read them and it makes me cry. :( If you have a moment to add me to the filter or you know...write more now! *wink* and cater to my every whim that would be great. *G*

Hi, Alliebaby. ♥

[sosayethallie]

Give me ten minutes, then check again. *hugs* Hi baby, I love you.

[sosayethallie]

Aww, thank you honey. ♥ I'm glad you like!

[svilleficrecs]

*waves hi* :)

*also eyes pretty flirting boys above with interest*

[sosayethallie]

Hello! :)

I am working on them for a 9/1 due date. But I am, alas, slow.