Tear Pearl Part 5 (end)

Jun 13, 2011 15:58

 “There’s a flaw in that story of yours”, Yonghwa said to Seohyun when they were in their room. “When the mermaid brings the sailor to the rocky cave, you never told us why it took her so long to swim out of the place. It was as if she stayed for a great while with him that the water level lowered a lot and made her unable to come out ( Read more... )

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melibu7 June 13 2011, 08:55:46 UTC
OHHHHHHHH this so fluff!!!!!!! and sweet!!!!!!! reminds me of those fairytale i used to read... thats why i did not like the black angel i wrote cos it did not felt fantasy enough.

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rsmchirps June 13 2011, 09:02:52 UTC
Fluffy to the core!! I love it! So sweet.....

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erikaoi June 13 2011, 09:40:49 UTC
I like ur version of mermaid.its so so sweet,so so much love,so so adorable.so much love and you write it well.write more of yongseo.

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munie87 June 13 2011, 10:37:13 UTC
Awww..... how sweet the story goes... i always like the little mermaid story when i was a kid.... when u applied it yongseo, it gv me more meaning to me.... thanks and hwaiting!!!

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constantia11 June 13 2011, 11:30:14 UTC
yay! for fluff!!! I never thot this day will come for you to write fluff. LOL
I like it a lot.
the part where I laughed a lot : Hee as Chief Mate n his craving for mushroom!!! ROFL.
Keep on writing Khad.

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