Fic: Bertie And The Dashed Unhelpful Valet

[soul_bonnie]

Title: Bertie and the dashed unhelpful valet
Rating: G
Warnings: Just general silliness and general gen. Oh, and a non-native speaker's attempt at puns.
Author's note: This has been waiting on my harddrive for forever, i.e. almost a year. Ideas for fics about a certain day or holiday always only come to me at the end of those days. -_- Well.
A thousand

Comments

[the_lucky_ducky]

I was wondering whether you'd post this today.

As you already know: I like.

Mistakes can also be send to me, since I'm the blind woman who probably overlooked them... I'll take the shame.

[coffee_n_retcon]

In that case, I'll just quietly point out that "Mistakes can also be send" should be "sent" instead. (You did a fine job in your beta of the actual piece.)

[the_lucky_ducky]

Darn. Thanks, I thought it looked slightly strange ;)

*bows head in shame*

btw: Awww, you like Torchwood! <3

[coffee_n_retcon]

There is no shame. I only do 3 languages: English, American and Canadian (okay, and a smattering of Australian.)

And I used to LOVE Torchwood. Then they killed my 3 favourite charcters. Now I choose to believe that the Pandorica reset everything and TW never happened. *Sigh* I'm happy that isn't a risk in Jeeves & Wooster.

[derien]

Ahahaha!! Delightful. :)

[soul_bonnie]

That was exactly the reaction I had hoped to get. :) Thank you!

[coffee_n_retcon]

This is really adorable. I have to wonder if Bertie will attempt a bit of revenge.

[soul_bonnie]

Thank you! ^^
Well, if he dares... and if he could come up with something clever enough to fool Jeeves. :)

[coffee_n_retcon]

It's rather doubtful that Bertie could truely fool Jeeves, but I'm sure Jeeves could, in fact, fool Bertie into believing he'd succeeded. :D

[soul_bonnie]

Are you trying to get me to do something...? ;)

You're right of course. I'll think about it. :D

[anansie_s]

HA! Werk it, Jeeves! This was hilarious. I wasn't expecting that ending at all. I loved this bit:

I opened and closed my mouth like a rainbow trout might when surprisingly yanked out of its warm, cosy pond to find itself on a boat next to a fisherman with murder in his eye.

“Jeeves!,” I cried out in italic print.

[soul_bonnie]

\o/ Yay, I managed to write a surprising ending! :)

To be honest: I'm quite proud of those sentences as well.;) Thanks for your nice comment!

[anansie_s]

I was convinced that Jeeves was giving Bertie a test -- you know, to see whether after 7 years of being saved by Jeeves, B. would finally be able to deal with an unexpected situation and turn off a girl all by himself :)

(I hope you write the sequel mentioned above, in which Bertie takes revenge!)

[soul_bonnie]

Oh, a very nice idea. But I think that would make Jeeves kinda redundant, so even IF Bertie was all grown-up... the last thing Jeeves would do is tell him that. :D

We'll see... it all depends on my inspiration, the slut. She's cheating on me with god-knows-whom at the moment, so I hope she'll come back when she's hungry! :D

[storyfan]

Oh, that was lots of fun! I especially loved Bertie when he's hollering in italics!

[soul_bonnie]

If only I could manage drama quite as well as crack, I'd be sorted!
Thank you so much for your comment, it means a lot to me.