A Way With Words - Chapter 35b

[soulan]

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[gwylliondream]

Really enjoying this richly layered story. It seems like we are moving in slow motion toward the inevitable. Thanks to your betas! Nice touch.

Have a great weekend!

XO
Donna

At Last!!

[sjmarv]

Whew! Very hot morning after bed scene with Ennis and Jay. Interesting that apparently he interacted with her in a way unlike he he'd ever done before, but typical of your version of Ennis, he could do so without needing an "instruction manual." He is so much less engaged in their lovemaking in the first part of the chapter, at least less "engaged" mentally and emotionally! ;)

Thank you for finally giving us the Andy Warhol story! Ennis acted with such assurance to approach an American icon so calmly! I know I couldn't do that! It does appear that between his first days of his relationship with Jay, he is most self-assured than he is in 1988.Now I am curious as to what happens in the interval to make him less certain of who he is and where his life is headed.

Don't know why I', so verbose today! Go figure!

Susan

[geordie3]

Oh, I've been waiting for this -- thanks so much! Your story is often in my thoughts, and I can't wait to see how it all unfolds. Your writing truly is remarkable.

[tui77]

Such an interesting story - thank you so much!

Cheers

Tui

[mariez65]

So many interesting things to digest and comment on! I'm repeating myself, but I love the way Ennis's mind works; no matter how confused or conflicted he is about his feelings for Kaj, it's clear that he and Jay are in sync in so many ways and that their relationship does have a genuine foundation of friendship.

"I know you hate to intrude on our privacy," I said, "but would you mind taking our picture?"

I just love your Ennis :) And I love what Jay wrote on her autograph, too :) I'm enjoying this so much - thanks.