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[soulblue173]

Hey this is the I was talking about along time ago KT. I don't know why I'm posting it now I just feel like it. so :P Anyway I really want to hear what you think of this one and the last post before this poem. Can't wait to hear your thoughts. Oh yea I actually wrote the letter after I wrote this, But I just happened to post them in a backwards

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[my_sacrifice11]

I love that poem. it's amazing. it really is.

So she never saw this one? Man, it almost made me cry. And I DON'T cry. haha

But it's absolutely beautiful. I love it. It really rips open your heart and forces you to listen. Very open..I'm proud of you.

And as for the letter...I like the slight ambiguity, but directness of it. It got to the point, without sounding like a butthead. Very nice....

Hey, we should do something on the 4th....any plans???

[soulblue173]

Well that sounds good to me, we could go see some fireworks or something. I really don't have anything going on so it would be nice to hangout. I guess just give me a call, or I'll call you, if you pick up for once ;)

Oh yea thanks for the comments on the poem. I can tell you are very incitfull as to the feelings and what I'm trying to get at in the poem. Which is nice to see, because most people that read my poems just say,"oh it's great" but don't really understand or se what the poem is really saying or feeling. Thanks alot it helps. Cry Baby KT