so, yeah, this is my College essay in it's final form

[soulessjest]

I’d say it was about six months ago, when my mom tiptoed into my dimly lit room and climbed under the black comforter. She wrapped me in her arms, and whisper silly things like “the bunny says wake up, Ryan,” I remember waking up, asking for another half hour. She laughed, and began telling me her expectations for the day. Her voice became tense

Comments

*aplauds*

[colctveunconciu]

that is a very impressive essay Ryan. even if you did cut off 300 words i still think you deserve an A. good luck when you pass it in and when you go back to school.

[soulessjest]

how is that amusing?

[anonymous]

That's beautiful.

It really is.

You should be very proud of that. I hope that someday you will be able to do your story justice and add those 300 words back onto it.

^_^

[soulessjest]

thank you, very much. I aprecitiate the comment, lots.
out of curiosity, do i know you? or you me?

thanks again
Ry

Re: ^_^

[starspell]

Um... I'm not sure if you know me. I know who you are... I went to WHS.
I just graduated last year.

I'm Jay Coorey's girlfriend, Elise.

Re: ^_^

[starspell]

By the way, I posted the first comment, if you hadn't already figured that out. The non-anonymous thing might have seemed random.