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sour_idealist

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Aug 28, 2011 16:32

Title: When All Else In You Turns and Runs
Fandom: Homestuck
Characters/Pairings: Dave/Jade/Terezi
Ratings/Warnings: PG, swearing, implied PTSD
Written for: N/A
Wordcount:1600
A/N: Title taken from Vienna Teng's "Love Turns 40."

( You open your eyes, find Dave motionless and lips half-parted, Terezi leaned in with her head tilted slightly just the way she does when she doesn’t want to miss a single detail, and you lean in and kiss the Knight of Time as gently as you know how, with the Seer of Mind’s pulse thrumming against your palm. )

fanfic, homestuck

Comments 6

1st_eggokage August 29 2011, 02:01:31 UTC

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SHUT UP WITH YOUR PRETTY WORDS

EXCEPT DON'T

EVER

oh terezi oh dave oh jade oh my precious kids ♥________♥

this comment is inadequate but i am so tired right now

ilu

sour_idealist August 30 2011, 06:29:23 UTC

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BEAUTIFUL BROKEN BABIES OKAY

(man writing Jade being pensive was surprising, I was not expecting all her issues with losing people)

this comment is very adequate Sara, ILU too.

twilit August 30 2011, 03:05:25 UTC

Well.

That was a thing.

That just happened.

Can't say I hated it.

sour_idealist August 30 2011, 06:30:50 UTC

Well. Thank you? I am certainly glad you did not hate it!

Should I gather that it was in some way unexpected?

borednowbutton August 31 2011, 22:12:34 UTC

His hand curves over yours, thumb twisted around yours and three fingers splayed across the back of your wrist; for a moment you wonder whether it’s him or John who holds hands strangely,

I really loved this line.

sour_idealist September 1 2011, 17:14:01 UTC

Thank you so much! I love playing around with how lost these three are, when it comes to things like dealing with people.