112. Jasmine, Forever

[sour_plums]

 Words: 170
Summary: "Here where you daddy don't hit you and your momma don't yell, you can be forever, Jasmine"
Inspiration: Brigit's Flame contest prompt
Notes: I think I want to start to write a romance series in the same pattern I've written all my "X: Water Sign" entries. Those were unfortunately true, but I want to try my hand at some more

Comments

[jamais_toujours]

I really liked this, especially this image: You will dig your toes into the dirty mud sand shores like roots and try to plant yourself here. Good luck :).

[kithlyara]

Even though this is a short entry, the imagery is beautiful! You managed to convey quite a lot in the few words you wrote. Well done!

[darlinleo]

Your lines make me think of song lyrics! This is unusual but I liked it.

Welcome to the FLAME!

[anonymous]

Amazing!

[aquarius_galuxy]

=o I liked how you drew parallels between the girl and an actual jasmine plant - the imagery is interesting, and you've made me visualize romance in a new way! The last line also makes me stop and think, 'cause it's like a window into the girl's actual life. Very interesting piece!