Letting You Unravel Me (Quinn/Rachel) - Part 1/2

[sourrific]

Title: Letting You Unravel Me
Author: sourrific
Pairing: Quinn Fabray and Rachel Berry
Rating: Part one PG-13; Part two hard R?
Length: Part one ~5,400 words; part two ~7,100 words
Spoilers: Through 2x18, “Born This Way”
Disclaimer: If I owned these characters, you would be watching this instead of reading it.
Summary: Quinn is peer-pressured into

Comments

[thatissodawn]

Wow, love this first part. Can't wait to read the ending!

[sourrific]

I feel like the second half is stronger than the first, so I think you'll like it! Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

[ashdo]

OMG, I love it so far... the beginning was sooooo funny, the whole chapter had me laughing so many times... I'd have to quote it in its entirety !
I'm gonna read the next part straight away :)

[sourrific]

Yay! Thanks for the compliment. Enjoy the second part!

[iceonthewing]

why did I cry at the end? idk maybe I just felt so bad for Quinn, you made her character so relatable and real. All of them tho but Quinn... I just wanted to hug her. Seeing someone you like being with someone else... that hurts man.
But aah the happy ending!! I'm gonna read the other part now.

[sourrific]

I know it hurts! Poor Quinn. I like to torture my characters too much... but Quinn's tough (okay, Santana's tough, and she'll knock some sense into Quinn), so she can handle it.

[winstonta]

Very awesome so far. I really like what you did with this. :) I have to admit that when you had Rachel mention having genuine feelings for Finn I had this sinking feeling that maybe she was playing Quinn, manipulating her obvious feelings for Rachel. But you quickly proved me wrong and then I was happy again.

Oh, when the club is planning their kisses for the show, was it Finn, Sam, and Artie who were going to do the three-way kiss?

Now onto part two! :D

[sourrific]

Ha, yes. I picture Artie in his chair in the middle, Finn and Sam leaning down and each kissing one of his cheeks. :P

Enjoy part two!

[winstonta]

The imagery is actually kinda cute, I just wasn't sure since I think the text read "Kurt" and I was sure you previously mentioned Kurt and Blaine taking advantage of the song to make out :D

Currently enjoying/almost done with part two (kinda sad it's almost done :()

[sourrific]

Oh, good catch! I fixed it; thank you. :)

[malexfaith]

Powerful first part. The depth is amazing. Off to the next. Thanks heaps for sharing

[sourrific]

Thank YOU for reading!