Saints and Sinners (Quinn/Rachel) - Part 2/2

Jun 09, 2011 21:42


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(Part one is back here)

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She intended to do it, she really did. But when she showed up in the parking lot the next morning, practically the first thing she saw was Rachel Berry, leaning against Puck's truck, laughing flirtatiously up at him. Rachel didn't even notice Quinn, and Quinn barely resisted the urge to throw her croissant at ( Read more... )

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feintidea June 10 2011, 03:28:26 UTC
This was so sweet and perfect :) I liked how you dealt with the religious aspect too, and made it so Quinn and Rachel didn't just get together after Quinn said she liked her. And while I understand that it can be important, it was nice to see a Faberry fic that didn't linger on Quinn's past taunting of Rachel too much. Really well written.

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grizzly392 June 10 2011, 04:05:27 UTC
This was amazing! Your writing style was mesmerizing and when I got the end of the story all I could think was "holy hell that was perfect". I'm totally looking forward to your next story!

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ayden07 June 10 2011, 04:09:14 UTC
This is a perfect story, besides being a piece of EPIC Faberry fiction. I loved it! Quinn's struggle, with understanding herself and trying to accept what makes her happy in life, is so real (for me). Its hard admitting something that you were raised to think against. This story rings so true for my own life right now. You captured the fear that everyone, your family, friends, etc. will turn against you if they find out that you are "different" (whatever that means). This is an amazing piece of work, I only wish real life could work out this well. I only wish that one could end up with the girl or guy that they love...

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sourrific June 11 2011, 01:01:57 UTC
My family is fairly religious, too, but I was lucky in that my mom was okay with it when I told her I liked girls -- I don't think she's entirely happy with it, even now (it's been a couple of years), but there was no blowup, no intervention like poor Quinn's subjected to in this story. I have so much sympathy for anyone who has to deal with negative reactions, especially from someone as close as a parent.

Thank you so much for the nice comment, and I'm wishing you luck with anything you're going through right now. :)

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fallinghard4her June 10 2011, 04:12:08 UTC
This was really great, I like that Quinn didn't just give in right away, it gave the story more development. Awesome job, oh and really awesome Santana helping Quinn seen...it was...ehm, hot. (;

Great job again.

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sourrific June 11 2011, 01:03:58 UTC
The three-way kiss scene was the very first scene I wrote for this story. The rest of the fic grew out of that! I just really wanted to write that, as the Unholy Trinity is my (not-so) secret OT3. :P

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thek8lyn June 10 2011, 04:28:48 UTC
How is it...you with words...every time...and I'm like...gaaaah...and then things in my heart, start feeling things and warm and fuzzy...and all I want to do is cry and giggle and sigh...

Brilliant. Well written. Spot on characterizations. Breathtaking. Heartwarming. Perfect. Real. So real.

Just...I love you? Is that appropriate? No?

(It probably isn't, I have a girlfriend, but still.)

(Rambling comment rambles)

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sourrific June 10 2011, 20:50:00 UTC
Haha, I don't care if your comment was appropriate or not, because it made me laugh. Thank you!

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