Comments | southernbellakv: Lost

southernbellakv

Lost

Mar 07, 2009 21:01

Here's my entry for Week 1 of March ( Read more... )

Comments 7

drippedonpaper March 9 2009, 02:29:37 UTC

The ending especially is just SO gorgeous. If this is how you write when you are uninspired, I can't wait to read what flows when "your muse returns."

This is a great entry, I'll definitely vote for you. I know you should be moving on to next week!

Please keep writing, whether you are inspired or not, this was just beautiful!

southernbellakv March 11 2009, 01:14:09 UTC

Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate your thoughts. It's comforting to know that it made sense. LOL

walkertxkitty March 10 2009, 01:54:31 UTC

I'm impressed if this is how you write when you are uninspired. It's beautiful in its simplicity and a subtle application of the topic.

As a writer, I can identify with that kind of stasis. The hardest part is waiting for the words to come and then sitting down to put them on paper or the screen.

southernbellakv March 11 2009, 01:17:49 UTC

It's so frustrating. Usually when I'm suffering in one writing aspect, I can switch to a different genre or writing environment and find something. Lateley I have just been dead in everything.

Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it!

wow giazz_40 March 10 2009, 15:07:23 UTC

This is really quite well done. I love the imagery that the words create, yet, having the reader feel how you are feeling (um, not trying to be repetitive here).

Great read, and voted from me!

Re: wow southernbellakv March 11 2009, 01:22:22 UTC

Thank you for the vote! I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the feedback!

cedarwolfsinger March 12 2009, 21:41:10 UTC

Nice job of describing a dry period. Good luck with this piece. Also -- I hope it is the first step out to reconnecting with "the brilliant hues of a lifetime..."