Heart's False Start (2/5)

[sowhat_ilied]

Pairing: Quinntana
Rating: NC-17
Description: It begins as most things do: with a kiss.
Word Count: 8,938/5,439 (this part)
Spoilers: None
Notes: For my wife, her long-awaited Quinntana army fic. Merry Christmas, Faye.

Comments

[oh_hail_nah]

Too bad, so sad Brittany! That's all I could think of lol.

Fantastic story so far, can't wait for more.

[taramclay01]

ugh this story is amazing.. I'll be patiently waiting for more ;)

[candycoated30]

Oi, my e.m.o.t.i.o.n.s are all over the place. Quinn can be soo frustrating like 50% of the time. That situation should have made her realize that she MUST hold on to Santana because...okay um yea going into cliched romantic drama quotes. Poor San and her love woes....LOL You are an awesome writer my friend. ^_^

[phandomsock]

Well done, I totally believe that Quinn would be just as difficult with admitting love (to/for Santana, especially) even if San *weren't* in the military, and the progression of this relationship of theirs is perfect. Ouch for the Britt phone call... both of them. The almost catty back and forth of two women hissing over a mutual love for another, as well as the gut wrenching pain you describe so well from Brittany listening to San talking about loving someone else. Just... really well done. :)

Sooooo.... not to be one of those dicks, but still kinda being that dick.. where's the rest? :)

[leyton426]

So good. It hurts my Brittana heart but I'm glad Brittany is at least mature about it and is willing to let Santana go and be happy. Quinntana is so close but yet do distant. Hope they finally take that leap of faith together and fix this.
I'm excited to see what else you've got for this story. Good job so far. :)